October Girl

I like black and white :lol: 8/10

Hmm, what to say? This poem was actually pretty good. As you said you needed to just get this out and let it be heard, and I heard you loud ...

This poem is ok, but it could be improved on, sorry dear. But this is just the truth. I'm suck in the middle of do I like it, or do ...

(Chelsea Luna) "Yeah, I'm fine. Thank you for being here." I said holding his hand. "It does mean alot to me, I know that you love me." I said smiling ...

(Chelsea Luna) "Um, I guess I owe you a thank you then." I smiled. "You're welcome." He said. "I sure it's nothing." Brian said, holding my hand. "Yeah," I smiled. ...

(Chelsea Luna) "I'm fine, really. I just collapsed that's all. I'm at the hospital 3 miles from the club. But I'm fine really. They're probably going to let me go ...

(Chelsea Luna) Insted of sending him a text I called him. "Hello?" He said he sounded tired. "I'm sorry, did I wake you?" I asked, biting down my bottom lip. ...

(Chelsea Luna) A COUPLE OF HOURS LATER... I woke up at a hospital... I was sleeping, what happened while I was out? Was marc looking for me? Was anyone looking ...

This was very interesting, but not very detailed I have to think on it, I'm not exctly sure I like it or if I hate it... Sorry this Crit isn't ...

uh huh? 6/10

so true 10/10 :D

who hasn't? I'm in love with that series!!!! :D :D :D -Max

it is 7:51 AM here in Cali

some of us are even from different countries. But I live in California!!! -Max

Hello, and welcome to YWS, I'm Max. I've been on this site for about 3 yrs and would be happy to help you if you needed anything, if you just ...